15 comment-to-DM campaigns worth copying

Setting up a comment-to-DM rule takes three minutes. Deciding what to offer is the part that takes people weeks, and it is the part that determines whether anything happens.

Below are fifteen campaign structures, each with the hook, the keyword, the message and the follow-up question. Adapt them; do not copy them word for word, because the specifics are what make them work.

Every one assumes the mechanic covered in how comment-to-DM works.


Creators and digital products

1. The process breakdown

Hook: "This reel took 40 minutes to edit. Here's the exact timeline." Keyword: TIMELINE DM: The project file or a screenshot of the editing timeline. Follow-up: "What are you editing in at the moment?"

Works because the artefact is specific and visibly real.

2. The tool stack

Hook: "Everything I use to run this account, nothing sponsored." Keyword: STACK DM: A linked list of tools. Follow-up: "Anything you're trying to replace right now?"

3. The preset or template drop

Hook: "This is the preset on every photo in my last 12 posts." Keyword: PRESET DM: The download, gated on a follow if the preset is genuinely good.

4. The mistake post

Hook: "Three things I got wrong in my first year that cost me money." Keyword: LESSONS DM: A longer written breakdown. Follow-up: "Which of the three is closest to where you are?"

That question segments your audience in one tap.

5. The waitlist

Hook: "Doors open on the 14th. 30 places." Keyword: WAITLIST DM: Confirmation plus the exact date and time. Follow-up: "Anything you want covered that you haven't seen elsewhere?"


Coaches and consultants

6. The self-audit

Hook: "Nine questions I ask before taking on a client. Score yourself." Keyword: AUDIT DM: The question list as a document. Follow-up: "Which one did you score worst on?"

The strongest structure on this list for coaching. It delivers value, produces a diagnosis, and the follow-up question starts a conversation about a problem they just identified themselves.

7. The price transparency post

Hook: "What my programme costs and who it isn't for." Keyword: PRICE DM: The actual numbers and what is included. Follow-up: "Does that fit what you had in mind?"

Fewer comments, far better ones. Do not gate this one behind a follow — see follow to unlock.

8. The client teardown

Hook: "A client went from X to Y in eleven weeks. Here's what we changed." Keyword: BREAKDOWN DM: The case study. Follow-up: "What's the bottleneck on your side?"

9. The booking post

Hook: "Four discovery calls open this week." Keyword: BOOK DM: The calendar link, immediately, with no preamble.

Scarcity only works if it is true. Say four if it is four.


Ecommerce and product

10. The restock alert

Hook: "Back in stock Friday. Comment RESTOCK and I'll message you when it's live." Keyword: RESTOCK DM: Confirmation now, link on Friday.

Among the highest-converting structures here, because the person is pre-sold and only waiting on timing.

11. The size or fit guide

Hook: "Between sizes? Here's the actual fit chart." Keyword: SIZES DM: The chart plus a link to the product. Follow-up: "What's your usual size in other brands?"

12. The bundle

Hook: "These three together are 30% less than separately." Keyword: BUNDLE DM: The bundle link and what is in it.


Local and service businesses

13. The price list

Hook: "Everything we do and what it costs. No 'DM for pricing'." Keyword: PRICE DM: The full list as a document. Follow-up: "Whereabouts are you based?"

The follow-up qualifies for service area before anyone wastes a call. More on this in Instagram automation for small businesses.

14. The availability post

Hook: "Three slots left this month." Keyword: SLOTS DM: The actual dates and a booking link or number.

Include a phone number. A meaningful share of this audience would rather call.

15. The before and after

Hook: A transformation image or clip, with the job described. Keyword: QUOTE DM: Your pricing structure and what affects it. Follow-up: "Roughly what size is the space?"


What the good ones have in common

A specific artefact. "Tips" is not an offer. "The nine-question audit I use with clients" is. If you cannot name the thing, people will not ask for it.

A keyword that describes the thing. AUDIT, RESTOCK, SIZES. Not YES or INFO — those collect volume and nothing else. There is a fuller list in 51 trigger words.

Delivery before any ask. Send the thing, then ask the question. Reversing that order reads as a bait-and-switch.

One follow-up question, answerable in a line. This is the single highest-leverage element and the one most people omit. It converts a delivery into a conversation and tells you who is worth your time.

An offer matched to the surface. Reels reach strangers, so lead with something introductory. Stories reach your warmest audience, so use them for time-limited things — see Reels + comment-to-DM and story reply automation.

Before you run one

Comment your own keyword from a second account and check the DM arrives, reads correctly, and the link works. The most common campaign failure is not the tool — it is an expired link or a keyword nobody can spell.

Then watch what people actually type. They will use words you did not predict, and adding those to the same rule usually recovers more leads than any other single change.